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From the Classroom: On Prewriting Using Modes

By Tricia Ebarvia

My AP Lang students are currently working on their “On” essays—writing on anything they choose.

There’s a long tradition of “On” essays in the world… and by an “On” essay, I mean any essay whose title starts with the word “On…” (although, really, isn’t anything an “On” essay if it’s on a topic? The distinction for my purposes in teaching is really just technical). We read essays like “On Keeping a Notebook” by Joan Didion and “On Dumpster Diving” by Lars Eighner, which explore process. We read a contemporary essay like “On Compassion” by Barbara Ascher and a 19th century essay like “On Running After One’s Hat” by G. K. Chesterton, which delve into the philosophical as well as social commentary. We read “On Being a Cripple” by Nancy Mairs and “On Being Black and Middle Class” by Shelby Steele,” which focus on identity. We read essays by Lewis Thomas, whose essays,“On Warts” and “On Probability and Possibility,” are some of the best examples of elegant science writing—and writing in general—I’ve encountered. And still we read other essays whose titles don’t begin with the word “On” but embody the ethos of writing on what it means, ultimately, to be in the world—essays like “The Jacket” by Gary Soto and “Me Talk Pretty” by David Sedaris and “Salvation” by Langston Hughes.

We study and celebrate these writers and their craft. We ask ourselves questions that help us read like writers: What can I take away from this? What can I learn? What can I steal? Because my AP Lang students read Austin Kleon’s Steal Like an Artist for summer reading, we remind ourselves to embrace being artistic thieves. We look at the ways in which these essays explain, define, and describe; how they use anecdotes and allusions; how they feature both insight and curiosity; how they zoom in and zoom out. 

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To get us moving through the writing process, we spend a lot of time prewriting. As Don Murray reminded us, “Prewriting usually takes about 85% of the writer’s time.” Murray continued:

According to Murray,

Prewriting is everything that takes place before the first draft. Prewriting usually takes about 85% of the writer’s time. It includes the awareness of his world from which his writing is born. In prewriting, the writer focuses on that subject, spots an audience, chooses a form which may carry his subject to his audience. Prewriting may include research and daydreaming, note-making and outline, title-writing and lead-writing.

What I especially love about prewriting is the spirit of discovery that takes over. Just yesterday, a student shared with me a story of how, in elementary school, his mom had come to pick him up in a different car. While he searched for the metallic gold Toyota Sienna minivan in the carpool line, his mom was driving up in their Subaru Outback. He panicked, “I couldn’t find my mom!” The memory of that moment, the anxiety and fear, all came back; you could see it on his face. He hadn’t thought about that moment in years, but there it was.

And this is what writing does—it reminds us of who we were, who we are, and whom we hope to become. As Joan Didion points out in “On Keeping a Notebook,” we write to keep in touch—on “nodding terms”—with our former selves. Doing so makes us and keep us whole. Writing preserves our integrity.

PREWRITING THROUGH THE MODES

One strategy that I have found particularly useful for prewriting is to ask students to think about their topic and write about it using multiple modes. Last year, I wrote my own “On” essay called, “On Bah Humbug!” In it, I lamented how the holiday season has become an increasing source of stress for me. Christmasses as a child were filled with tidings of comfort and joy. Christmasses now are filled by endless lists of things to do, traffic lines-too-long to the mall and even longer lines at the register. To model writing through the modes, I took my topic and wrote about it in a variety of ways:

Chronological A timeline of Christmasses past
Informational History of Christmas cards and gift-giving
Narrative Anecdote about having to wait in line for a specific toy
Compare/Contrast List of differences between the gift-giving as a child (“Santa’s Workshop” at school) and gift-giving as an adult (endless lines at the store)
Division/Classification Types of shoppers, presents, holiday food, cards, songs, etc.
Process Analysis How to wrap presents and not to drive yourself crazy in the process
Descriptive The look on my children’s faces on Christmas morning
Definition What does it mean to be a Scrooge?

Although I didn’t use everything I wrote, I did use enough of it. But more than that, I would argue that writing about my topic through each of these modes allowed me to figure out what I wanted to ultimately write. Students try out these modes as “vantage” points from which to examine their topic, and then go back to reexamine our “On” Essay mentor texts to see how professional writers also draw on the modes.

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One example of a student writing on his topic through various modes

The legendary photographer, Ansel Adams, once said that “Photography is knowing where to stand.” I’d say the same thing is true for writing, too.


Tricia EbarviaTricia Ebarvia currently teaches 9th grade world literature and AP English Language & Composition at Conestoga High School in Berwyn, PA. She hopes foster a love of learning by designing authentic reading and writing opportunities for her students, every day. Tricia is also a 2016-18 Heinemann Fellow. She can be found on Twitter @triciaebarvia or on her website at triciaebarvia.org.

6 Comments Post a comment
  1. I love the idea of prewriting. I feel like the idea of prewriting is something that many students/teachers don’t do enough of, or even see the full benefit. I know that many of my students see prewriting as writing as much of their topic as possible; but it is also a time to get new ideas, to think about a topic, and to discover what they might truly want to discover in their writing. I love the “On” types of writing you showed us, too. Great ideas!

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    November 6, 2016
  2. Elizabeth #

    Tricia, that piece by Murray stuck out to me as well. Pre-writing is extremely important, but my students hate it. I like your idea of writing through the modes. It seems like a reflective process that would be extremely helpful.

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    November 2, 2016
  3. ritasorrentino #

    What a giant step is taken when students realize the importance of prewriting. I’m hoping to model this with some younger students. Thanks for giving us a window into your classroom.

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    October 31, 2016
  4. Jill K. #

    Tricia, I remember reading that section of Murray and having it spark this realization of when my writing turns sour right before me, it’s because I have cut corners or tried to rush my pre-writing. If I haven’t explored alternatives, or really built good bones, it’s so hard to look at a piece of writing that isn’t working and know why– or how to fix it. Thank you for the great, detailed ideas of different ways of exploring my topic before I begin. And for reminding me of how important this part of the process is… it never hurts to hear it again!

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    October 29, 2016
  5. Tricia – thank you for your detailed explanation of the process you and your students undergo to work through the process of writing “On” essays. You gave me a lot of great ideas I could take back to my own classroom!

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    October 29, 2016
  6. janiceewing #

    Tricia, I love the idea of trying out different modes as a way of prewriting. It gives the writers so much flexibility with their topics, and would probably help them to see which mode best fits their focus, purpose, and point of view. Thanks for sharing these ideas!

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    October 28, 2016

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